Talk:Million Reasons/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:31, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• backed by guitar and piano → This does not fit well in the sentence and you can leave it out for the lead
• making it a positive message song → making it a song with a positive message
• The music video was directed → An accompanying music video for "Million Reasons" was directed
• and it continues from → remove "it"
• and by Grateful Dead's Bob Weir → remove "and by"

Infobox

• Flawless ;)

Background and release

• introduced Gaga and Lindsey → introduced Gaga to Lindsey
• Link "old school"

Recording and composition

• Sample > An 19 second sample → A 19-second sample
• Sample > The lyrics also illustrate the romantic heartbreak and religious faith of the singer in them → The lyrics also showcase the romantic heartbreak and religious faith of the singer.
• Hillary Lindsey → Unlink her here and write her full name and link her in the first section
• BloodPop did the additional → use "handled" here
• rhythm track, string → rhythm track and string
• Who is GenPop
• with a tempo of approximately → with its tempo swinging around
• link "beats per minute"
• Her vocals span → use "The singer's" here
• Roberts theorized that like most → comma before "like"

Critical reception

• generally positive reviews → ... from [[Music journalism|music critics]]
• potential appeal to "Daddy Lessons" also → ...Lessons" as well
• Write "Idolator" in italics
• and claimed that it is simple and sweet → and found it was simple and sweet
• nature of the track was also suited with current American radio → remove "also" as you have it already in the sentence

Chart performance

• Unlink "promotional single"
• her first to achieve that → her first to achieve such ranking
• achieved peaks of numbers 17 and 5 → achieved peaks of numbers 17 and five
• The top-ten placement in the → ...top ten...
• Link "Applause"
• one million digital copies in the US → write out to "United States"
• performance of the song in The X Factor → the correct preposition here is "at"
• it debuted at number 107 according to the SNEP → remove "the"
• was the ninth highest entry → was the ninth-highest entry
• her highest peak in the latter → ...country

Music video

• The music video for "Million Reasons" → An accompanying music video for "Million Reasons"
• Unlink "music video"
• on December 14, 2016, afternoon → no comma
• After that her crew comes → After that—in the music video—her crew comes (to clarify)
• rather made the video about → but rather focused

Live performances

• A toned down performance → A stripped-down performance
• Following week after the performance → The following week...
• The next performance of the song happened at the 2016 → use "occured" here
• The singer began her UK promotion → ... her promotion of Joanne in the United Kingdom
• to the country's, following → to the United States following

Cover versions

• and uploaded on her Instagram → and uploaded it on her Instagram
• The performance was appreciated with the judges → comma before "with"

Track listing and formats

• You should include the original digital download of the song
• Remove "and formats" from the section's title as it's only one format: digital download

Credits and personnel

• Credits adapted from Joanne liner notes. → past this at the top and write it like this: Credits adapted from the liner notes of Joanne.

Charts

• Flawless ;)

Certifications

• Flawless ;)

Release history

• Flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 50.3% is too much! Several sources have been over-used; please remove some content from the top citations.

Media

• The media and images appear stable ;)

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

• Good job with the article. I put it  On hold for 7 days. Good luck editing and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:32, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Starting this today. Thanks for waiting. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 14:14, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
    • @Cartoon network freak: I believe all is addressed. Thanks for waiting so patiently with my delays. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 13:27, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
      • Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:43, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

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