Talk:Minyahil Teshome

Latest comment: 5 years ago by JohnSmith13345 in topic Neutrality

Neutrality

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This article has neutrality issues. The way it is written was biased in his favor, which is below the Wikipedia standard for a biography of a living person. It was also presented as a wall of text.

The section said

Minyahil is playmaker [sic], left footed, intelligent and [sic] always giving his full for the team [sic]. Despite being technically sound [sic] as a wing play-maker, he always has an eye for strikers. He unlocks defenses with his well-timed precise passes, knows when to time his run, and more importantly, how to put the ball in the back of the net. He is great with his first touch and a master at playing one two’s [sic] with team mates [sic] just near the edge of the box.

A player who is good with short passes [sic]. Likes to show off his amazing skills and make a mockery of a defense by dribbling past them with his amazing pace like [sic]. A team player who makes the team click and makes the wingers a huge part of his off the ball generosity by making sublime passes, possibly the reason he doesn’t assists [sic] so much goals.[1] He began his career with Ethiopian Coffee FC, and joined Dedebit in 2012.

The following is a list of NPOV issues including the Facebook citation

”intelligent and always giving his full for the team”
“he always has an eye for strikers”
“his well-timed precise passes”
“knows when to time his run, and more importantly, how to put the ball in the back of the net”
“great with his first touch”
“master at playing one two’s with team mates”
“good with short passes”
“amazing skills”
“mockery of a defense by dribbling past”
“his amazing pace like”
“makes the team click”
“makes the wingers a huge part”
“off the ball generosity”
“sublime passes”
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Wikipedia is not a soapbox for how great your favorite football player is. Wikipedia is not the place for this kind of problem, and it is even less suitable in a BLP.

JohnSmith13345 (talk) 04:03, 24 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ "Soccer Ethiopia". Retrieved 2018-03-28.