Talk:Mis Romances/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: 9 months waiting, I'll take it Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 00:26, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

Oh my, I believe this is the first time you've ever reviewed any of my articles for GA, no? Erick (talk) 00:49, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

Yes, this is the first time. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 03:59, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality (prose is clear and concise, without exceeding quotations, or spelling and grammar errors):

   B. MoS compliance (included, but not limited to: lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists):

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources (it also includes an appropriate reference section):

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary (including direct quotations):

   C. No original research:

   D. No copyright violations:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):

6. Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?

   A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are relevant, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Resolved comments from Tbhotch

;Infobox Length - It says 38:55 but the tracklisting adds 38:32 Lead "Los Angeles, ..." ... "London, England" -> Pick either "Los Angeles, California" and "London, England" or "Los Angeles" and "London" Unlink LA, London and England per WP:OVERLINK Link "Amor 3x" to its article "neither a critical or a commercial" -> shouldn't it be "nor"? "It reached number one" -> "Additionaly, it reached number one" Background "Produced by Armando Manzanero and arranged by Bebu Silvetti," -> change it to active voice "and was the first record" -> "recording"(?) "released" is used 4 times in the paragraph "record" is used 9 times as a noun and twice as a verb Musical style ""Cómo Duele" and "Al Que Me Siga" composed by" -> "Cómo Duele" and "Al Que Me Siga", composed by Promotion Link Billboard "To promote Mis Romances, Luis Miguel" -> You have written his second name only throughout The second single, "Cómo Duele" -> The second single, "Cómo Duele", "number one song" -> number-one song Link Chula Vista, CA "shows in the United States.[34] Miguel's concerts in the United States ... After his performances in the United States. on 14 December 2002 in the Dominican Republic -> DR is linked but it was previously mentioned at "Dominican Republic and Puerto Rico" The Los Angeles Times -> The Los Angeles Times and its predecessors as well as pop tracks -> and its predecessors, as well as pop tracks Reception "noting Miguel's rendition of "Perfidia" had been covered by several artists" -> This line is unclear "that while the album's production was "bolstered" by Miguel's vocals, she called it "predictable"" -> I suggest to rewrite it. "Fernando Gonzalez wrote for The Washington Post highlighting" -> he wrote what? The second paragraph uses "record" 4 times See also List of number-one Billboard Latin Pop Albums from the 2000s -> List of number-one Billboard Latin Pop Albums from the 2000s References 2 - Allmusic should not be in italics 3 - Directes -> Diretes Sources 1 and 4 should look like 1956 Winter Olympics#References and 1956_Winter_Olympics#Further reading 6 - Alfonso Quiñones (author) is missing 11 - Link Chicago Tribune 12 - Unlink Chicago Tribune 15 - Allmusic should not be in italics 17 - Allmusic should not be in italics 27 - La Prensa (Buenos Aires) -> La Prensa (Panama City) 31 - Link El Universal 39 - Link Los Angeles Times 40 - Link Chicago Sun-Times and Sun-Times Media Group 41 - Unlink Chicago Sun-Times and Sun-Times Media Group 44 - Link United Press International; it should not be in italics 54 - Reyes, Salvador Franco -> Franco Reyes, Salvador 55 - Cámara Uruguaya de Productores de Fonogramas should not be in italics 61 - "los medios no quieren cubrir sus conferencias de prensa y un buen sector" -> drop "y un buen sector" as meaningless (or the paragraph from "Cansados de" as irrelevant to the page). 62 - Allmusic should not be in italics 63, 64 and 65 - Billboard is overlinked 6, 52, 59 - They have translated titles, but other Spanish language sources don't. Choose one style.

Article on hold. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 03:59, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

Just a heads up, I probably won't start working on this until Friday due to my busy work schedule. Erick (talk) 17:03, 30 January 2019 (UTC)

I believed I've addressed most of the issues you brought up. For the length time, I used what was on AllMusic since it's the only reliable source I trust with it and the album charts template automatically makes refs 63-65 link Billboard magazine. Erick (talk) 18:53, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

OK then. I don't see any other issue, so I pass its nomination. Good job. © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 01:06, 2 February 2019 (UTC)