Talk:Missamma (soundtrack)/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Yashthepunisher in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 22:10, 1 March 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this shortly. Yashthepunisher (talk) 22:10, 1 March 2019 (UTC)
- In the third sentence of the opening para, you need to mention that NTR and Savitri starred in the lead roles to differentiate them from the supporting ones.
- "The Tamil soundtrack, released a month later by HMV, was also successful." Successful in what sense?
- There is a sort of repetition in the opening line of 'development' section. Try rephrasing it.
- Is the Rama Rao quote really necessary? I don't think it adds anything to the article.
- Wikilink publisher in ref 6 to maintain consistency.
Veera Narayana That's it from me. Resolve my queries and the article will pass with flying colours! Yashthepunisher (talk) 19:34, 2 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Yashthepunisher: I've hopefully resolved your queries. Let me know if you have anything further. Regards, Veera Narayana 22:34, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
It's a pass. Yashthepunisher (talk) 20:33, 5 March 2019 (UTC)