Talk:Missing (Body of Proof)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 14:10, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
Having reviewed "Hunting Party" I figure I might as well review this article as well. Where theres a similar issue with the other episode I'll simply mention it quickly and put in (HP) to indicate to refer to the other review for more details about what I mean.
- Lead: Extra line to summarise show. (HP)
- Plot: Citation at end of section and repeating actors names from the lead (HP)
- Production: You don't need (Delany) as you've already linked the two previously.
- Same thing with the home media paragraph. (HP)
- Reception: Same query about the Radio Times quote, and if any RT information can be added to the critical response section. (HP)
Glad I decided to jump in and review this one too as the issues are pretty much similar to the other article. Same thing applies, I'll stick it on my watchlist and on hold. Miyagawa (talk) 14:10, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, a lot of your points I addressed at HP, so aha! Thank you! — M.Mario (T/C) 16:59, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- You'll need to have a look at the note left by Gen. Quon on HP. Miyagawa (talk) 18:14, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- Left note on talk page. Will close in seven days if I haven't heard back from the nom. Miyagawa (talk) 11:30, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- The article now meets the GA guidelines. Miyagawa (talk) 19:05, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Left note on talk page. Will close in seven days if I haven't heard back from the nom. Miyagawa (talk) 11:30, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- You'll need to have a look at the note left by Gen. Quon on HP. Miyagawa (talk) 18:14, 12 February 2013 (UTC)