Talk:Missing You (Ingrid Michaelson song)/GA1

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 20:35, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 20:35, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• No comma needed after "American singer-songwriter Ingrid Michaelson"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• WL lead single

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "and was produced by the latter"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• WL lyric video and music video

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "which features" → "featuring"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:31, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Background and writing

• "while de Jong producing the track" → "with de Jong producing the track"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "either a scene or theme" → "either a scene or a theme"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• No comma needed after "theme from Stranger Things"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "she believes" → "that she believed"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "In a May 16, 2019 Instagram post," → "In an Instagram post dated May 16, 2019,"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "is relatable to several listeners" → "is widely relatable"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• "as the album's lead single" → "as the lead single of Stranger Songs"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• ""grainy bassline."" → ""grainy bassline"." per MOS:LQ

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• "C Major" → "C major"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• "Stranger Thing's" → "Stranger Things'"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Italicize Popdust

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Comma after "sings the lyrics"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• ""Missing You"'s lyrical content" → "the lyrical content of "Missing You""

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Add spaces for all of the / line breaks in the last line of the second paragraph

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Include a topic sentence such as: ""Missing You" received positive reviews from music critics."

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Idolator should be italicized, as it's the name of a publication

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Ditto with Popdust

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• Move the last sentence, which talks about commercial reception, to a new paragraph

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:45, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

• That's also where you'll put the chart that I mentioned down below

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:47, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Music videos and live performances

• "A lyric video inspired by the video game Pac-Man was released on May 10, 2019, the same day as the single." → "The single's release on May 10, 2019, was accompanied by a lyric video inspired by the video game Pac-Man."

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• "An official music video was released on July 10, 2019, which was directed by Daniel Carberry. Michaelson premiered the music video on Today. The entire video was filmed in one take." → "An official music video was released on July 10, 2019, premiering on Today. Directed by Daniel Carberry, the entire video was filmed in one take."

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• I would include that Kevin Wada is most known for his work as a comic book artist

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• "The main character's gender ambiguous" → "The main character is of ambiguous gender"

Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• The references included in the last line are not very reliable (and one of them is now broken). Try a tour review, like this

Okay, sources replaced.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:03, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

References

• References [4] and [44] are the same

Fixed. Removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• References [28] and [31] are the same

Duplicate removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:08, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• References [32] and [38] are the same

Fixed. removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:08, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• References [33] and [47] are the same

Fixed. Removed duplicate.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

General comments

• Infobox photo meets NFCC criteria
• No stability issues
• Underneath the music video section, there should be a section for Credits and personnel – see "Willow" and "RoboCop" for examples

There is very limited information online pertaining to the song's credits, but I've added what is available in reputable sources.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:51, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• Underneath that should be a list of charts: I see that "Missing You" was on Billboard's Adult Top 40 Airplay chart. This should also be worked into the prose

Fixed/added.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:51, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• Earwig copyvio score looks decent at 29.1%; looks like most of that is lyrics

Putting on hold to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 16:26, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Ghost Hi there, thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm actually out of town for a few days without access to my own computer but I'll begin addressing your points as soon as I've returned home (should be within a week). Hope you don't mind!--Changedforbetter (talk) 16:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Changedforbetter Thank you for letting me know! I'll hold the nomination open until you're ready. :) — GhostRiver 16:53, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

GhostThank you for your patience! I've addressed/responded to all concerns; awaiting final verdict.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:54, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Changedforbetter I made a couple last tweaks myself, but otherwise good to go! — GhostRiver 22:28, 10 September 2021 (UTC)