Talk:Missing You (The Saturdays song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:54, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

Lead:

• "Missing You" is a song performed by British girl group The Saturdays taken from their first mini album, Headlines!." Add a comma after; The Saturdays,
• "The lyrics centre around being in a relation ship with the passion has gone but still being addicted to the love that used to be." i would re-write to "[...] around being in a relationship where the passion has left, but still being addicted to the love that used to exist.
• "It features an electropop production which incorporates elements of trance and synthpop. rewrite to say "It features an electropop production which incorporating elements of trance and synthpop.
• "However critics gave the song mostly negative reviews, criticising the decision to release it as a single, for using auto-tuned vocals and described the song's production as lacking in energy." Rewrite, do not start a sentence with However, however is a continuation of a previous sentence, there is no sentence before it. Needs a new opening.
• "An accompanying music video was features scenes of the group dancing on a beach in Málaga, Spain" Huh? lol.

Please address these and i will do a more thorough review when i wake up as its 10pm and im tired. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:54, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

Issues addressed. -- Lil_℧niquℇ №1 | talk2me 21:35, 11 October 2010 (UTC)