Talk:Mississippi Highway 53

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 00:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)

• I assume the existed parameter in the infobox refers to how long it existed as a highway, not how long it existed in general? Kees08 (Talk)
  • Yeah, just the designation.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 03:53, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
• Try rewording this: "MS 53 travels northwestward through rural western Harrison County,[7] including Lizana."
  • Reworded.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
• Reword
  • From: At Herman Ladner Road, the highway turns westward and later crosses the Wolf River. MS 53 then enters Hancock County after crossing the river.
  • To: At Herman Ladner Road, the highway turns westward and crosses the Wolf River, entering Hancock County.
    • Switched.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
• Doesn't it do this the whole route? "Once inside Pearl River County, the road intersects multiple driveways through the farmland."
  • Added a word.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
• Reword this: "Almost all of MS 53 in Harrison County and more of Pearl River County were paved by 1953."
  • Split into two sentences.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)
• Maybe use this image?
  • Added, great catch.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 03:53, 31 October 2017 (UTC)

Highway 53 in Lizana - panoramio

@Kees08: Fixed all issues.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:09, 4 November 2017 (UTC)