Talk:Missouri Route 16

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ks0stm (talk · contribs) 00:36, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
I will review this article. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 00:36, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• "Route 16 starts at a three-way junction at Route 6 east of Lewistown, middle of farmland": Consider making this flow a little better, perhaps something like "Route 16 starts at a three-way junction at Route 6 in rural farmland east of Lewistown". Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Changed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:15, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Consider adding inline citations after each sentence in the route description, as it makes it more clear that the content is referenced and by what. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Added a few.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:15, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Is Route 16 a part of the United States National Highway System? Add that information. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Added.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:15, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Add {{convert}} for any time you mention a distance. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Done.

• "A section of a road from Monticello to Lewiston were paved" ←Fix this grammatically. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

• Fixed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:15, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Get those fixed and I'll pass the article. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 01:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

@Ks0stm: Done.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:21, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Looks good; I'll pass the article. Ks0stm ^{(T•C•G•E)} 15:09, 20 February 2014 (UTC)