Talk:Mit Gas/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Grapple X in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Puffin (talk · contribs) 16:00, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

I will review it. Puffin Let's talk! 16:00, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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Production

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  • Tomahawk is a musical supergroup composed ofTomahawk is a musical supergroup consisting of
    Sure this. GRAPPLE X 16:54, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Mike Patton, vocalist for Faith No More and Mr. Bungle; Duane Denison, guitarist for The Jesus Lizard;Mike Patton, vocalist for Faith No More; Mr. Bungle; Duane Denison, guitarist for The Jesus Lizard;
    I think you've misread it here, "Mr. Bungle" is another band that Patton was in, rather than a person. A semicolon would be breaking it up incorrectly. GRAPPLE X 16:54, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Tool's guitarist Adam Jones offered to direct a video but this was declined.Tool's guitarist Adam Jones offered to direct a video but declined. - or didn't he? Who declined the offer?
    Source just says the band declined the offer, so I've added "by the band". GRAPPLE X 16:54, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Personnel

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  • It would be good to introduce the section with the source where the credits came from.
  • Can you provide a citation for these?
  • You need to use — here
  • Well the source is the album itself, so it seems a bit odd to source it to itself (it's essentially the same source that's giving the track listing and times, the cover and the title, etc). I guess I could use {{Cite album-notes}} if you'd like but it seems a bit circular. Have replaced the dash symbols with dash code, though I don't know what difference that makes (not exactly a tech savvy kind of guy here :P) GRAPPLE X 16:58, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Release and reception

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[step] out of the shadows" of their previous careers.[step] out of the shadows" of their previous careers." - you forgot to close the quotation marks

Quote was closed at "shadows"; the quoted part is "[step] out of the shadows". GRAPPLE X 16:59, 13 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Chart performance

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  • It also attained a peak of 7 on theThe album also attained a peak of 7 on the
  • Mit Gas also charted in Norway, making it to number 17The album also charted in Norway, making it to number 17
  • staying in that chart for two weeks.staying there for two weeks - the word chart is repeated a lot