Talk:Modesta Ávila/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Cmuncey in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krimuk90 (talk · contribs) 02:36, 14 August 2014 (UTC)Reply


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  • Was her name written as Avila or Ávila?
Ávila is official Spanish spelling but most sources refer to her as Avila. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:10, 24 August 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • In "Prosecution and imprisonment" "..at the newly opened Orange County Superior Court" should be "..at the then newly opened..."
Done.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • "Her lawyer, George Hayford, himself of dubious standing". The source provided does not mention his name, but says that he was inexperienced and "probably crooked".
Direct quote added.
  • Are Ricardo Sánchez, Fred Gómez Carrasco, and Alvaro Luna Hernandez notable enough to have their own articles in the future?
Definitely. I had already blue linked a number. I'll try to blue those too. The judge though, nothing on him, will de link.
  • Is sanjuancapistrano.net" a notable enough source? Can we replace this with a better one?
I believe so, it seems to be reliable source for local stuff.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

Overall, a very interesting read. -- KRIMUK90  06:25, 23 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review @Krimuk90:!♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:   -- KRIMUK90  10:54, 27 August 2014 (UTC)Reply