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This article is written in good language, but a lot of information might be unimportant. Therefore some clean-up may be needed.

But most importantly: I doubt if this article is neutral, because:

1) There is a lot of "blabla" about Mogema;
2) No information is given on the fact that Mogema's ice skating products, didn't "make" it in "speed skating world": no elite skaters (at least for longtrack) skate on Mogema's skates. Also in recreational use, Mogema is a very small player in the market compared to for example Viking and Raps;
3) There is a lot of information about "inventions" of Diederik Hol, which is intended for faster skating (for example rotrax skate), but it is doubted if the "invention" improved skating time at all. No notice at all is maded on these points.

Please correct me, if I'm wrong. Look also to the discussion pages in Diederik Hol and Narrow_Shape_Cross-Section.

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