Talk:Mohammad Askari

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Slgrandson in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: So far, almost everything on this page is a one-sentence-paragraph slew, making it look disjointed. For a cleanup tip, please read WP:Manual of Style/Layout#Paragraphs.

Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 20:09, 23 July 2023 (UTC)Reply