Talk:Mohammed Ibrahim Al Shaibani
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removal of un/poorly sourced promotional material
editI have removed un/poorly sourced material from the page as per WP:PROMO and moved some of the content to other parts of the page.--Faizal batliwala (talk) 08:10, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Lead section
editThe lead should summarize key points as per WP:Lead. It currently provides too much trivial detail or information about subject's leadership roles that have been discussed in detail under career. I have removed extra info and moved some of the content to other parts of the article.--Faizal batliwala (talk) 09:06, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
I have removed the UPE tag, as I believe I've cleaned up the article enough and moved it more toward compliance with WP:NPOV. For now, it's at least in better shape and any future edits that are too promotional or that cannot be sourced can likely be reverted.--Faizal batliwala (talk) 14:34, 30 September 2020 (UTC)