Talk:Monaco at the 1984 Winter Olympics

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:36, 11 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review this one. MWright96 (talk) 16:36, 11 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Infobox

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  • Add David Lajoux as the flag bearer

Lead

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  • Remove the space at the bottom of this section as it is unncessary

Background

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  • "and have participated in most Summer Olympic Games since then." - remove "then"
  • "The Comité Olympique Monégasque (the National Olympic Committee (NOC) of Monaco) was not recognized by" - recognised

Alpine skiing

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  • "which put him in 47th place out of 60 competitors who finished the race." - event to avoid close reptition of "race"
  • How about adding "scope=col" to the columns in the data table per MOS:DTT?

References

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  • Wikilink Sports Reference on the first time it is used

Not too much to be done for this article. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 16:50, 11 November 2018 (UTC)Reply