Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Bruce Campbell in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Initial Comments

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  • Lead
  • The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough
  Done
  • Background
  •   Done
  • Composition
  • "In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.
  • Reception
  •   Done
  • Music video
  •   Done
  • Charts and Release History
  •   Done
  • References
  •   Done

Overall Summary

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Final Summary
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (Is there clear sentences, spelling and grammar?):  Y
    b (Does it comply with MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists?):  Y
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (Is there a references section?):  Y
    b (Are there citations for quotes/statistics/challenging info?):  Y
    c (Does it contain no original research?):  Y
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (Does it cover the major aspects of the topic?):  Y
    b (Does it use summary style?):  Y
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    (Are points made with due weight?):  Y
  5. It is stable.
    (Are there no edit wars, etc?):  Y
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (Do the images have appropriate fair-use rationales?):  Y
    b (Do the images have suitable captions?):  Y

Overall:
Pass/Fail:   Pass

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Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)Reply