Talk:Monster (Millennium)

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 00:02, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox

  Done. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Link American to Television in the United States

  Done. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: It premiered on the Fox network on October 17, 1997 → It premiered on the Fox network in the United States on October 17, 1997

  Done. 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: by should be from, for the guest performances in the lede

  Done. 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Second paragraph - Add "In the episode"

  Done. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Broadcast and reception: Fox Network should be Fox network, with no capital for network.

  Done. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Broadcast and reception: Was first broadcast on Fox Network in which countrY?

  Done. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Notes: Link 1997–1998 television season

  I assume you mean link it to 1997–98 United States network television schedule? The article is currently undergoing an AFD so if it survives I could link it but there's no point now in case it's deleted. 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• Footnotes: As in the X-Files articles, maybe you should format it as in this article, and others.

  I take it you mean the semi-colon instead of a lower section heading. Screen readers have difficulty understanding the semi-colon in that context, so I prefer to use a section header to keep things in line with MOS:ACCESS. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• References: Could you cut down on dead links?

  Not sure what you mean, all the online sources used are still up and running. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Sorry, I mean't red links. TBrandley 01:49, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

    Have removed the link to Mark Freeborn, it's unlikely to be created in a rush; I've left John Peter Kousakis in as I do plan to create it. GRAPPLE X 01:56, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

That's all. Great work. On hold for now. TBrandley 00:10, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I've addressed or responded to your points; though one or two have raised questions in response. GRAPPLE X 01:42, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

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