Talk:Mount Berlin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:34, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Link glacier, maybe? They're becoming less and less common.
• Per MOS:OVERLINK, I don't think you need to link Antarctica, especially not twice in the lead
• Link Marie Byrd Land Volcanic Province, it looks like it should probably be capitalized, too.

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Geography

• "and 1994 - 1995" - Per MOS:DATERANGE, use an endash and no spaces.
• Flood Range is overlinked multiple times

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Geology

• Marie Byrd Land is a duplink, as is mafic and ignimbrites
• " Ignimbrites are rare in Marie Byrd Land, the outcrop on the southeastern flank of Mount Berlin is a rare exception" - Semicolon, not a comma

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Local deposits

• Tons of overlinks in here: Merrem Peak, pyroclastic, tuffaceous, obsidian, pumice, hyaloclastite
• Is there a way to link or gloss welded vs. unwelded?

Done, only through a Wiktionary link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Composition

• Lots of duplinks here, too: Mafic, Mefford Knoll, Wedemeyer Rocks, Brandenberger Bluff, basanyte, and trachyte

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Eruption history

• Duplinks: Wedemeyer Rocks, Mount Takahe, West Antarctic Ice Sheet, Mount Moulton, Mount Waesche, ice cores, West Antarctica

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Chronology

• "It may correspond to a 443,000±52,000 lava at Merrem Peak" - Lava what? Lave flow? Lava dome? Lava tube?

  Doesn't specify, presumably lava flow. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• Argon-argon dating appears to be overlinked.
• Vostok is overlinked
• Link Siple Dome at the first mention, not the second. It's also overlinked in here.

Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Categories

• It's in Category:VEI-5 volcanoes, but that does't seem to be mentioned anywhere in this article.

Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

That's it, I think. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 23:39, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

@Hog Farm:Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)