Talk:Mountain Meadows Massacre and Mormon public relations
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Ancheta Wis in topic Poorly constructed sentence
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Poorly constructed sentence
editPlease clarify 'who what where when etc' in the following sentence:
- Leonard is one of the co-authors of the book the LDS Church is writing about the massacre.
Right now the sentence fails to answer
- Is the book about the massacre?
- Is the LDS church writing about the massacre?
- Is the LDS church writing a book about Leonard?