Talk:Mountain kingfisher/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by AryKun in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:30, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- What is "rufous"?
- Reddish-brown color, added link.
- "It is .." vs "They also..." sing -> pl, any reason?
- Clarified, it was supposed to refer only to adult males.
- "loral patches" what?
- Linked.
- Don't know what a culmen is.
- Added link.
- "clutches of 2" two.
- Fixed.
- "to New Guinea. It is found through" merge.
- Done.
- "between altitudes of" at elevations between...
- Done.
- "Mountain kingfisher has been designated as the official common name by the International Ornithologists' Union (IOC). The species is also known as the greater yellow-billed kingfisher or mountain yellow-billed kingfisher." unreferenced.
- Added refs.
- "the genus Syma, along" link Syma first time.
- Done.
- "nominate subspecies" link?
- Done.
- "lumping the two" is that really the technical term?
- Yeah, see here.
- " ... 21–24 cm (8.3–9.4 in) in length." unreferenced para.
- Added ref.
- "can look similar" is similar in appearance.
- Done.
- " 3-4" en-dash.
- Fixed.
- "small lizards, insects, and larvae" you only linked larvae in the lead...
- Fixed.
- Link IUCN in the article. Indeed, explain what it is, it's not clear to non-experts.
- Added link, but I don't think that an explanation is necessary as the Red List is pretty well-known.
- Dates in references should be consistent format.
- I added a date to the Journal fur Ornithologie ref, are there any others with errors? AryKun (talk) 10:10, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:02, 27 September 2021 (UTC)