Talk:Murder of Michael Causer

Notability?

I'm curious how this person doesn't fall into WP:MEMORIAL or WP:ONEEVENT? Is there any information on how this boys death is more notable than any other person's death? -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 05:54, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

Since the article is now about a notable event, the problem is no longer present; per Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Michael Causer. --Law Lord (talk) 15:01, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Because he was viciously murdered by 2 boys for no reason whatsoever! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.201.173.190 (talk) 19:06, 10 February 2009 (UTC)

Anaphora

the trigger-point for the violence came when sexually explicit images of the trainee hairdresser were found on his mobile phone

Does this mean "the trigger-point for the violence came when sexually explicit images of Causer were found on Causer's mobile phone"? Since the article hasn't mentioned Causer's job until this point, it's not obvious who "the trainee hairdresser" is. And to avoid the passive voice, who found the images, and why? Marnanel (talk) 16:40, 26 October 2012 (UTC)

Good points - I've edited this based on the existing references, removing the passive tense, job reference and generally clarifying. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2012 (UTC)