Talk:Murders in the Rue Morgue (1932 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 18:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Change the uses of [[Leon Ames (actor)|Leon Ames]] to simply [[Leon Ames]]

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Change all uses of the book "Universal Horrors" to either Universal Horrors or "Universal Horrors".

Changed Universal Horrors to italics as its a book. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Miton Carruth → Milton Carruth per the reference used.

• Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Articles (examples 1 and 2) usually have the premiere location, (in this case, the RKO-Mayfair Theatre) after the first date in the infobox, and (United States) after the second.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Some characters in the first paragraph have the actor's name right after they are mentioned, but others do not. Try to be consistent.

I've changed this so they all match. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• A good lead section has a good premise that doesn't spoil the entire plot of the film. To accomplish this, simply remove the sentence starting with "Dupin proves his innocence".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• No mention of the date February 21, 1932, in the lead?

I mean, do we need to? I think it's ok how it is. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• The plot changes from using the name "Pierre" to using "Dupin" to describe the same character. Fix this.

Now says Pierre consistently. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• "deliver it to Pierre the next day" → "deliver it to him the next day"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Remove (D'Arcy Corrigan) per consistency with the rest of the plot section.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• The actors who portrayed the "Italian Alberto Montani, German Franz Odenheimer and a Danish man" should probably be mentioned in the cast list.

Done. They are thankfully within the Universal Horrors source as well. As is the Ape, so I've removed the unique source for it. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Production

• Move the third reference after the sentence ending with "did not begin until 1931" to after the comma following "March 1930". Additionally, merge the other two references into a single citation titled "Weaver, Brunas & Brunas 2007, pp. 47-48."

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• "Frankenstein was in production" → "Frankenstein was in pre-production" or "Frankenstein was in preparation".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Mention the fact that the studio dropped Melford as director once Florey was available for leaving Frankenstein.

From my readings, its not clear that's exactly the case. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Put "a lack of sex appeal" in quotations in the article.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Merge the two citations after "murderer spoke" to a single citation titled "Taves 1987, pp. 137-138."

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Same thing with the two references after "numerous characters". Change to a single citation titled "Taves 1987, pp. 138-139."

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• "..." → "[...]"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Release

• Combine the two citations after "1949" to a single one titled "Rhodes & Kaffenberger 2016, pp. 113-114."

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• "Andre Sennwarld" → "Andre Sennwald"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Link "The National Board of Review Magazine" to National Board of Review.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Try removing some quotes from the review by Patrick Legare per WP:RECEPTION.

I just cleaned up the quotes here. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the following: "The authors also said: Entrenched in a style which condemned it as a relic before its time, Florey's experiment has come to be regarded as a cinematic barrel of spinach that even the most jaded fan finds hard to swallow. Beyond its vulgar excesses and inspired theatrics, however, lurks a daring full-throttled-Poe inspired thriller couched in a darkly sinister aesthetic all its own" per WP:OVERQUOTE.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Also remove the following per WP:OVERQUOTE: ", and said; "Depending on the disposition of the individual viewer, the 'feeling of dreamlike unreality' can go either way, to describe an 'oneiric masterpiece' or just plain incompetence".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Legacy

• Remove the "!" after "haunt me".

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• "The Raven and The Black Cat" → "The Black Cat and The Raven"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Merge the two citations after "deranged scientists" to a single reference titled "Heller-Nicholas 2020, pp. 7-8."

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

References

• Archive all archivable sources.

Done now. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

• Link the American Film Institute in the last two references.

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Overview

GAN table

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

• @Andrzejbanas: This article is in great shape but could use some small adjustments. I have just finished adding most, if not all of my notes for this review, so feel free to add comments and message me back. I hope I can promote this article to GA-status really soon. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:35, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! I think i've addressed everything @Some Dude From North Carolina:. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:44, 21 January 2021 (UTC)