Talk:Music of Middle-earth/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 16:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Will read soon. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

• Music is at the heart of the Ainulindalë, Quenya for – hard to understand for a non-expert. I suggest to explain these terms, especially here in the lead.
  • Simplified and linked.

• Peter Jackson's Lord of the Rings film trilogy is – should "Peter Jackson" be in italics?
  • Fixed.

• "most obviously" in the Ainulindale – link at first mention (also: legendarium), and here it has a different spelling?
  • Fixed.

• Eorl the Young – link?
  • Linked.

• The Oxford Handbook of Music and Medievalism treats the song as "fantasy medievalism" – which song? Several are listed.
  • Ramble On.

• reflected in the music of several rock bands – not all discussed in that section are rock music (only Led Zeppelin is, I think). Stick with "popular music" instead?
  • Fixed.

• That's all I have, looks good otherwise. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 18:50, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:03, 4 January 2022 (UTC)