Talk:Music of the Spheres (Doctor Who)/GA1

GA Review

Everything's looking pretty good as of now, but here are a few little suggestions for further improvement:

• Wouldn't a colon be better than a semicolon after "Davies cites as examples of the Doctor's previous associations with music", as it's introducing a list?

  Done. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• A contradiction: Davies 'realised the Tenth Doctor had yet to show "any aptitude for music"' yet 'The Tenth Doctor has previously showed musical aptitude in several episodes...'

  Done. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• introduced the episode which was shown on a large screen above the stage - should there be a comma before "which" considering, just preceding this, there's a comma before "who"? It'd also be easier to read.

  Done. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• There shouldn't be a space before ref 3 in the Length parameter of the infobox (very pendantic, I know).

  Done. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• The rule of thumb for fair-use images is that they shouldn't exceed 0.1 megapixels. Image:Graskedoctor.png is currently a little over, but it's not a big deal - I won't fail the GAN if it's not scaled down a little. The Purpose and Portion parameters of the fair use template should be fixed, though.

  Removed it; It looks like it's been capped from YouTube. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

That's about it. The article will be on hold for a week, so good luck until then with making changes :) —97198 (talk) 10:24, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• Done all. Sceptre ^(talk) 12:56, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

• Who needs a week? Nice work :) I'm happy to promote the article. —97198 (talk) 13:00, 21 August 2008 (UTC)