Talk:Music of the Spheres World Tour/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Vaughan J. in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 08:27, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Calling dibs on this, but I'm starting this today! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 08:27, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good.
- Add a comma after concert tour Done
Add the release year of Music of the Spheres- Add a comma after 50% Done
- "concert run features extensive use" → "concert features an extensive use" Done
- Add a comma after wristbands Done
- Move ref 2 to where some of the sections where the wristband switch is mentioned in this article. Done
- "Coldplay also partnered" → "Coldplay has also partnered" Done
Development
editBackground
edit- Remove the YouTube broadcast, as that hasn't been mentioned in ref 4. Partly done – was changed to source that mentions it was broadcasted to YouTube
Sustainability
edit- Image looks good.
- "to utilise Sustainable Aviation Fuel from" → "to utilise sustainable aviation fuel from" Done
Fans and accessibility
edit- Good
Partnerships
edit- "and provite help" → "and provide help" – Typo. Done
Opening acts
edit- Image looks good.
- "Catt), Dominican Republic (with" → "Catt), the Dominican Republic (with" Done
Concert synopsis
edit- Good
Commercial performances
editTicket sales
edit- Image looks good.
- Everything else looks good.
Venue records
edit- Good
Critical reception
editNorth America
edit- Un-italicise NJ.com. Done
Europe
edit- Good
Rock in Rio
edit- Image looks good.
- Un-italicise UOL. Done
Latin America
edit- Un-italicise Omelete. Done
Accolades
edit- Good
Concert film
editOriginal broadcast
edit- Infobox looks good.
- Un-italicise IndieWire. Done
Final version
edit- Good
Legacy
editMusic industry response
edit- Good
Reduced emissions
edit- Un-italicise BBC News. Done
Cultural impact
edit- Good
Economic influence
edit- Good
Philanthropy
edit- Good
Set list
edit- Good
Tour dates
edit- Good
Cancelled dates
edit- Good
Personnel
edit- Good
Gear
edit- Good
See also
edit- Good
Notes
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score – It looks pretty decent with 34.2%.
- The reference list looks good.
External links
edit- Good
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of these issues are fixed; only just some minor changes, but good job on the article! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 08:45, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hello! I apologize for the grammar mistakes. I'm from Brazil, so English is not my first language! There were only two things from your notes that I haven't corrected yet: The wristband replacement (on it right now) and Music of the Spheres' release year. The tour was announced a day before the album came out, so I felt like it would look redundant. GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 11:41, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- Wristband switch corrected! Considering what I said in my first comment, is the album release year really necessary? GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 12:02, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- For the release year on the album, as you said, it depends on whether the tour was announced before the album came out the same year, so I'm actually gonna cross that out. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 12:40, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- By the way, I've also checked the remaining issues that have been done. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 12:40, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- Pass now; good job on making changes on the article! No issues are left! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 13:45, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
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