Talk:Music of the Spheres World Tour/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Vaughan J. in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 08:27, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    c. (OR):  
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

Calling dibs on this, but I'm starting this today! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 08:27, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good.
  • Add a comma after concert tour   Done
  • Add the release year of Music of the Spheres
  • Add a comma after 50%   Done
  • "concert run features extensive use" → "concert features an extensive use"   Done
  • Add a comma after wristbands   Done
  • Move ref 2 to where some of the sections where the wristband switch is mentioned in this article.   Done
  • "Coldplay also partnered" → "Coldplay has also partnered"   Done

Development

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Background

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  • Remove the YouTube broadcast, as that hasn't been mentioned in ref 4.   Partly done – was changed to source that mentions it was broadcasted to YouTube

Sustainability

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  • Image looks good.
  • "to utilise Sustainable Aviation Fuel from" → "to utilise sustainable aviation fuel from"   Done

Fans and accessibility

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  • Good

Partnerships

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  • "and provite help" → "and provide help" – Typo.   Done

Opening acts

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  • Image looks good.
  • "Catt), Dominican Republic (with" → "Catt), the Dominican Republic (with"   Done

Concert synopsis

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  • Good

Commercial performances

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Ticket sales

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  • Image looks good.
  • Everything else looks good.

Venue records

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  • Good

Critical reception

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North America

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Europe

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  • Good

Rock in Rio

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  • Image looks good.
  • Un-italicise UOL.   Done

Latin America

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Accolades

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  • Good

Concert film

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Original broadcast

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  • Infobox looks good.
  • Un-italicise IndieWire.   Done

Final version

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  • Good

Legacy

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Music industry response

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  • Good

Reduced emissions

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Cultural impact

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  • Good

Economic influence

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  • Good

Philanthropy

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  • Good

Set list

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  • Good

Tour dates

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  • Good

Cancelled dates

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  • Good

Personnel

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  • Good

Gear

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

Notes

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score – It looks pretty decent with 34.2%.
  • The reference list looks good.
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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  Pass now; good job on making changes on the article! No issues are left! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 13:45, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
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