Talk:Muslim conquest of Khuzestan
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It's not clear why this article needs to exist. Surely the writing could be tightened up, some material summarized, and the episode added to the history of Khuzestan. Zora 04:52, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
This article exists because it elaborates on an important part of the history of Khuzestan.
Do you feel troubled to have a well-documented article that reveals the truth and rejects your opinions?
It needs some polish but that's certain that this article is needed. Instead of including it as an episode in history of Khuzestan, I'll make a link from that article to this.
Stop your censorship Zora. Damned 18:03, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
Sorry for my language Zora.Damned 21:50, 18 January 2006 (UTC)
Almost looks like some of the text could be ported to Wikisource, and the material summarized here.--Rayc 15:50, 24 February 2006 (UTC)
CSD?
editSounds from the lede like a book report - single-sourced article with no references. Not good enough for the encyclopedia! Topic does seem notable enough, just the article needs some major cleanup. Paul M. Nguyen (chat|blame) 03:13, 11 January 2014 (UTC)