Talk:Mycena adscendens

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March 11, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 6, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that bonnets may be orange (pictured), clustered, scarlet, frosty, mealy, ivory, nitrous, grooved, snapping, milking, bleeding, or bulbous?

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 22:40, 10 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Happy to offer a review; I can't imagine that there will be any major problems. J Milburn (talk) 22:40, 10 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • "in what was then known as the Kingdom of Prussia" Why not "in what was then the Kingdom of Prussia"?
  • Do we know the etymology of tenerrima or carpophila? farinellus, at least, is pretty obvious- perhaps they'd be worth mentioning along with the first mention of them? If you don't think it's important, feel free to ignore me.
  • Added etymology for tenerrima; the farinellus epithet is from an obscure synonym, so don't think it's necessary; not sure if carpophila is from from Greek -karpion, from karpos fruit, or Modern Latin from Greek karpos (harvest), so left this one out. Sasata (talk) 16:34, 11 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "The cap color is pallid gray with a whitish margin when young, but soon becomes white overall." How about "The cap is pallid gray with a whitish margin when young, but soon becomes white overall."?
  • "are free" Jargon?
  • You don't mention the "disc" in the description section; just the bulb
  • "The spores are broadly ellipsoid, amyloid, with dimensions of 8–10 by 5–6.5 µm." Listy rather than prosaic?
  • "sometimes forked at time" What does this mean? "sometimes become forked over time", perhaps?
  • "and lacks clamps." Clamps have yet to be mentioned.
  • The spore print isn't mentioned in the prose, but is in the box.
  • Sources look fine. More specific page numbers for the Desjardin source would be useful.

The pictures are fine; generally seems like a solid article, and a good candidate for GA status. J Milburn (talk) 23:03, 10 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! Sasata (talk) 16:34, 11 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
Everything looks good to me. Promoted. J Milburn (talk) 18:46, 11 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
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