Talk:N. T. Rama Rao/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:28, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this soon JAGUAR  20:28, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• The lead appears cluttered and should require a minimum of three paragraphs per WP:LEADLENGTH. The first paragraph is too short and choppy whereas the latter half could be merged in each other
• Per WP:LEADCITE, citations are discouraged from the lead if not citing controversial information
• There are citation needed tags in the Political career section
• Achievements at the national level unsourced
• Personal life section could do with some copyediting and more citations. There's a tag in here too
• Death section could be merged

Close - not listed

I'm sorry to do this, but I'm forced to quickfail this due to several factors. There are numerous citation needed tags in the article (a quickfail criteria itself), choppy paragraphs and sentences and some organisational issues which means it doesn't meet the GA criteria at this time. The IP who nominated this is also inactive, so I'll be happy to review this again if it gets picked up. JAGUAR  13:21, 10 November 2015 (UTC)