Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

edit

  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sobaface. Peer reviewers: Ditisvoormijnuniversiteit, Lady-grinning-soul, Blackrose84.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:48, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review

edit

Hi, I am doing the peer review for our film class. This article is well written and well structured. I found this page to be well informative and resourceful. I really like how your paragraphs are simple but yet contain good mounts of information. I will try and fix any spelling mistakes or run on sentences I can find. I would suggest to have a section for maybe her best rated 3 or 4 movies and explain those movies so show her popular films in depth. Over all very well done. Blackrose84

Peer review

edit

This page contains such a clear and informative article about Trintignant. It is well written, well constructed and doesn't need much change in my opinion. In the biography you might want to add a personal quote of Nadine herself, maybe about some of the feminist issues she is involved in. Other than that you might want to lose some of the names of the films she made under the section beginnings under career, just to make it a little bit easier to read. You will name the movies later anyways and you also wrote down her role in it. I like the fact that when you talk about the movies you are able to involve information about the themes she uses and her personal life. Finally, maybe you could add something about the movie she won an award for? You already explain in a short and clear way what the movie is about, but I feel like you could extend that a little. Furthermore, I think that you used good sources and I like the fact that your filmography is so detailed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ditisvoormijnuniversiteit (talkcontribs) 14:29, 16 November 2016 (UTC)Reply