Talk:Nasreen Paracha/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Non-free use rationale on the image is in great condition.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk)
• "awarded awarded" → "awarded"
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• Add parts from every section to the lead to summarize the article.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• The storylines section looks good.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• As with other articles, recite references after every quote per WP:REF.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try to reduce the use of quotes in #Development.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• I couldn't find any actual issues at #Reception, but adding reviews from critics of her character would be nice.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• Overall, remove quotes and expand the entire article, as it only has 8 references at the moment.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• The reference after "2020 RTS Yorkshire Awards" should not be linking to highlighted text.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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