Talk:National Convention/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 00:32, 4 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • Why was aristocrats and antirepublicans absent?
  • Majorities begin revolutions; minorities carry them on- whats this sentence doing?
  • The rest part of the section has no citation
  • from all classes of society - but there was the society of estates
  • «The abolition of the royalty... How is it directly related to the text?
  • There is no link of Girondin Convention in its section
  • Jacobin club was an important part of the French Revolution and you have just written "name of a club."
  • Again a similar statement by Robespiere comes
  • Who were the Girondins is not clear
  • Put reference in the short two line paragraphs in The Trial of the King
  • The crisis and fall of the Gironde - Put reference in the necessary part

RRD13 (talk) 11:19, 4 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

It's been two months nearly and nothing's been updated; as such this fails GA status. Wizardman 16:51, 29 November 2014 (UTC)Reply