Talk:Nea Salamis Famagusta/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Delusion23 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Delusion23 (talk · contribs) 11:13, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
Any fluent speaker of English who has a quick read of the article can see it is quite a bad translation from the Greek version of the same article (see here [1])
Examples of such errors (and there are many more) include:
- "At the time of the founding of Nea Salamina, Greece was political turmoil"
- "members of Anorthosis who wanted to nationalist-dominated climate the club decided"
- "In the early of the decade"
- "The season 1965–66 is one of the best and painful at the same time seasons in the history of Nea Salamina"
- "Claimed the championship until the last game of the season and also played for the first time in the Cup final, but failed to conquer it"
I'm asking for a quick fail as in its current form, a lot of work needs to go into making the article readable. Del♉sion23 (talk) 11:13, 25 September 2012 (UTC)