Talk:New Jersey Route 181/GA2
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Rschen7754 in topic GA Reassessment
GA Reassessment
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There are significant prose problems in this article:
- Right in the lead, three consecutive sentences begin with the same words.
- this time with Route 15 southbound only, where it turns to the northeast and heads into deeper into Jefferson Township - what is it?
- The route crosses over the lake a short distance - so it stops halfway across the lake?
- Past Lake Hopatcong, the highway is primarily surrounded by dense woodlands and very little development. - redundancy
- Residential homes
- More repeated words.
- makes a sudden spike - wrong word
- to the east, north, and west - ! Why not the south?
- Route 181 Southbound - should be lowercase S
- without the highway turn - huh?
- through the development of Sparta - too vague
- and into the undeveloped woodlands
- coming to a partial trumpet interchange - link?
Please go through and copyedit this as this was just from a cursory look. I will put this on hold for the standard 7 days. --Rschen7754 04:21, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
- Lead fixed. Going through the RD tomorrow. Mitch32(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 05:04, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
- Lead and RD completely rewritten. Mitch32(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 16:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
- Okay, that's good enough for me. --Rschen7754 03:46, 3 June 2015 (UTC)