Talk:New Jersey Route 181/GA2

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Rschen7754 in topic GA Reassessment

GA Reassessment

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There are significant prose problems in this article:

  • Right in the lead, three consecutive sentences begin with the same words.
  • this time with Route 15 southbound only, where it turns to the northeast and heads into deeper into Jefferson Township - what is it?
  • The route crosses over the lake a short distance - so it stops halfway across the lake?
  • Past Lake Hopatcong, the highway is primarily surrounded by dense woodlands and very little development. - redundancy
  • Residential homes
  • More repeated words.
  • makes a sudden spike - wrong word
  • to the east, north, and west - ! Why not the south?
  • Route 181 Southbound - should be lowercase S
  • without the highway turn - huh?
  • through the development of Sparta - too vague
  • and into the undeveloped woodlands
  • coming to a partial trumpet interchange - link?

Please go through and copyedit this as this was just from a cursory look. I will put this on hold for the standard 7 days. --Rschen7754 04:21, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Lead fixed. Going through the RD tomorrow. Mitch32(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 05:04, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
Lead and RD completely rewritten. Mitch32(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.) 16:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
Okay, that's good enough for me. --Rschen7754 03:46, 3 June 2015 (UTC)Reply