Talk:New Jersey Route 440/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruslik_Zero 09:47, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

1. I think the lead should be shortened. The current lead is too long for such a short article. Please, also get rid of the third one sentence paragraph.
2. I also want to know what "an intentional discontinuity" means?

   It's supposed to mean - it was "Intentionally never meant to connect". Usage is gone though.Mitch32^{(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!)} 16:37, 12 November 2009 (UTC)

3. Please, replace the first image. The current one is of a very poor quality.

   Apologies, weather was annoying that day. Looking through my images for better ones.Mitch32^{(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!)}

4. Ref 9 is missing title and (possibly) author information.
5. Formatting of references should be consistent. If you are using templates for majority of them, use templates for all references. For instance, ref 9 can be formatted with cite news template. Please, also do not mix 'citation' with 'cite xxx'.

I do not see any other problems. Ruslik_Zero 09:47, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

I have pulled some information from the lead. It appears Mitchazenia has taken care of the other issues. ---Dough4872 16:00, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

Ref 9 still lacks title and author. Ruslik_Zero 19:56, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

Give me a little while, I will add what I can get from the date.Mitch32^{(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!)} 16:34, 12 November 2009 (UTC)

Ok. Found the physical article. There was no author information - one of their "Specials", but I did get a title in. So this should be good to go.Mitch32^{(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!)} 18:54, 12 November 2009 (UTC)

There is no title and author available. ---Dough4872 21:36, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Well, the article is promoted. Ruslik_Zero 19:23, 12 November 2009 (UTC)