Talk:New York State Route 370

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 07:05, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

Okay, Mitchazenia, I'll give this one good read. Looks decent enough at a glance, though. Courcelles 07:05, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• Okay, two stupid comments on the lede:
  • What makes NY 34 a major route?
  • Why is "New York State Route 37" bolded? Courcelles 07:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• "Most of the route is signed as an east–west highway; however, the portion of the route in Wayne County is signed north–south." Is there a direct citation for this? Courcelles 07:13, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• This sentence is just clunky; "Just west of Cato, the towns of Victory and Conquest give way to Ira and Cato, respectively." Try reading that without reference to Ida; "just west of Cato, towns X and Y give way to Cato." This town/village with same name is a NY quirk, I know... Courcelles 07:18, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• "At this point, NY 370 leaves the town line and heads northeast into Ira to avoid a large hill at the eastern village line." Not sure the map supports the idea of the change in course being because of a hill == not even sure I see a hill? Courcelles 07:20, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• "Not far from the canal is a junction with John Glenn Boulevard, a four-lane arterial connecting NY 370 to Interstate 690 (I-690)." A connection to an interstate, yet this road isn't listed in the major junctions table? Courcelles 07:27, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• Might be worth connecting Oswego Street and I-90 exit 38 in the prose (as well as the table) Courcelles 07:27, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

• Refs 17 and 19 "New York and New Jersey Tourgide Map" Just verify that's not a typo? Courcelles 07:36, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

Images look good and suitably licensed. Courcelles 07:36, 2 January 2014 (UTC)

Changes made except for the direct citation thing. You could do the signage thing one of two ways: a) I use WP:OI and upload a photo back it up, or b) Google Street view a sign or two. Mitch32^{(The man who renounces himself, comes to himself.)} 04:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Google street view would seem to be the easiest. Courcelles 05:50, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Don't even need that, see pic to the left of the statement. Mitch32^{(The man who renounces himself, comes to himself.)} 22:12, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Okay, we're done here. now, paperwork... Courcelles 00:56, 4 January 2014 (UTC)