Talk:Newfoundland expedition/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 00:58, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

• The 2nd-5th sections should become 3rd level under a section header labeled Battle.
• Everything in the lead (including infobox) needs a supporting sentence (with citation) in the body.
• Lead is overly large for such a small article. WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 00:58, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

Comments from DustFormsWords

Could I suggest that the section header "Bull's Bay" is an inappropriately short section (being one sentence) and should be merged to another section? And also that the quote in that section does not comply with our policy on quotes (incorporated under criterion 2(b) of the GAC) in that it is a full sentence quote not attributed in the article body, and that it makes inappropriate use of the pull-quote format and should instead be regularly incorporated into the article prose. - DustFormsWords (talk) 04:49, 14 February 2011 (UTC)

Failed

Failed as unresponsive and grossly unready. The last few sections need expansion and differ between the two Tocques in the citations. Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 00:57, 20 February 2011 (UTC)