Talk:Nicky Buckley

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Ocvailes in topic Grammar/clarity issues

Grammar/clarity issues

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The first paragraph of this article is poorly written and not clear. Is Buckley a household name because of her role on Sale of the Century? Or were her pregnancies highly publicized because of her role? Or something else entirely? I would fix the grammar issues if I knew precisely what the content should be, but due to the lack of clarity, I'm afraid that I would change the intended meaning of the article.

If anybody has the necessary information to fix the paragraph, please do so; otherwise, I will soon replace the article with an older, less complete but clearer version. I would really prefer to keep the expanded bio but as it stands its quality is not good enough. Ocvailes (talk) 02:42, 23 October 2008 (UTC)Reply