Talk:Night of Your Life (David Guetta song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 01:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

Resolved comments

• disc jockey (DJ)-music producer → DJ and producer
• additional vocals from → guest vocals by
• former's → Guetta's
• . Production for the song was also handled by Guetta and Tuinfort. → , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort.
• Music critics → Link
• generally positively → Poor phrasing, use only positively
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Section Done. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Background

Resolved comments

• , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort. → Use the same as what I have suggest for consistency.
• Guetta revealed that he did not know Jennifer Hudson that well and commented: → Guetta revealed that he did not know Hudson before collaborating on the song, saying,
• Several long quotes, can the longer ones be paraphrased.
• "Night of Your Life" was released for digital download on August 22, 2011, as the third and final promotional single from the album, as part of the iTunes Store's countdown to the album's release.[3][4] → Why is this a solo sentence, include as part of the paragraph.
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Section Done. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Composition

Resolved comments

• Again, this is made up entirely of quotes. At least two need to be paraphrased.
• The audio file caption, could you not make it a bit more informational and interesting? What is it about the chorus?
  •  Done Oz ^talk 21:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Section Done. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

Resolved comments

• Again, lots of quotes. Try to paraphrase some.
• Link "Repeat"

• •  Done Oz ^talk 02:03, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Chart performance

Resolved comments

• Considering the amount of charts the song charted on, this section is quite small. This could be such a good section. Look here for example, it's so easy to see the countries it chart in and the songs charting history.
  •  Done Oz ^talk 02:29, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

References

Resolved comments

Are actually pretty good!

• All of the ...charts.com references should, for example, have the work parameter as norwegiancharts.com, not VG-Lista.
  • I used the chart templates so the references are automatically shown like that. Oz ^talk 02:34, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

• FN6 and FN30 have double full stops (..) in the publisher, remove them, so only one automatically appears  Done Oz ^talk 02:34, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Overall

This is a great little article! Not much to sort out, on hold. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 02:18, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Passed! This is a great little article. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 02:47, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :) Oz ^talk 05:30, 4 December 2011 (UTC)