Talk:Nippy (Better Call Saul)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 03:45, 9 January 2024 (UTC)

@OlifanofmrTennant Hello! I hope you're having a good day! Thanks a lot for taking on this article. I hope you have a great read and I look forward to your advice. :) Dcdiehardfan (talk) 04:29, 9 January 2024 (UTC)

Immediate failure

1. It easily reaches meets all of the criteria.
2. [1] Earwig Doesnt flag anything
3. No maintenance tags.
4. Page is currently stable, no persistent vandalism.
5. This is the second review the first review brought up problems with reception. The issues have been adressed but I notice that the tomatometer is there despite the warning of a small sample by WP:ROTTEN which was mention in GA 1.

✓ Pass

Good Article

Well-written

She had previously appeared on The Larry Sanders Show with Odenkirk, but the two did not share any scenes in that series.

Relevence? Seems quite trivial, is it really worth mentioning?

 Removed -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 02:14, 12 January 2024 (UTC)

No other problems

✓ Pass

Verifiable

So immediatly I see the article is citing the episode itself which is not great

 Removed -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 18:30, 9 January 2024 (UTC)

 Done

I have randomly selected sources 12, 18 and 23 for a spot check. (based on this revision [2])

Spotchecks

REF 12

Claim:

Series creator Vince Gilligan later stated that Burnett's arrival on the set raised the morale of the cast and crew, who had all grown exhausted from the season's extended production

Source:

[3]

Proven by source: To quote the article, "Then suddenly one day Carol Burnett shows up for episode 10, and it just made everybody happy."

REF 18

Claim:

Scott Tobias of Vulture called it a "brilliant and wholly unexpected stand-alone episode" and gave it a 5 out of 5 star rating, enjoying the "homage" to All That Jazz (1979) and praising Burnett and Healy's performances.

Source:

[4]

Proven by source: The rating is present as is the comparison

REF 23

Claim:

In an A rating, The A.V. Club's Kimbery Potts enjoyed MacLaren's direction of the heist, saying she "creates a cheeky caper vibe complete with split screens and Lalo Schifrin’s “Jim On The Move” music from Mission: Impossible." She felt the pacing was deliberately abrupt, in order to allow viewers to digest the violence prior and felt that Jeff had irrevocably "sparked the unleashing of the Saul Goodman-ness".

Source:

[5]

Proven by source:All of those quotes appear in the article as well as the rating.

✓ Pass

Broad in coverage

The plot section is 346 words, 54 under the 400 word limit.

The article stays on topic for the majority of it.

✓ Pass

Neutral

Nothing is super postive or overly critical. Good blend of negative and positive reviews. ✓ Pass

Stable

No major edit wars or persistant vandalism recently.

✓ Pass

Illustrated

Of the images on the page 3/4 of them are free use the rational is good.

The side by side images of the different people who play Jeff.

The Image of Bob Odenkirk makes sense with the caption, I added a source for the claim

✓ Pass

OVERALL

I'm noticing a overall lack of issues which I think can be attributed to the previous GA where alot of problems cropped up.