Talk:No. 77 Wing RAAF/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 18:34, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- prose: (MoS):
- prose: (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
edit1. Wing headquarters. Suggest - No. 77 wing headquarters
- I didn't use "No. 77 Wing" because I'd used the name in the preceding sentence. Is there another construction you could go with, like "The wing's headquarters" or "Its headquarters"?
- Ah k, and yer your change is fine.
2. Suggest you add a second column to the notes to reduce the height of that section.
- Done.
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 18:34, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
- Tks for reviewing! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 02:30, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
- Passed. Good job Ian. Thurgate (talk) 13:28, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you very much. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 14:16, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
- Passed. Good job Ian. Thurgate (talk) 13:28, 11 May 2012 (UTC)