Talk:No (Shakira song)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:17, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- A pop ballad, the song explores → replace "the song" with "it" to avoid repetation
- is best for the two of them → is best for both
- a "tender" ballad and a "classic heartbreak song" → as you paraphrase here, you need the reference these claims here as well
- It also fared well → I would change "well" with "moderately", as no real big success was registered with this song
Infobox
edit- Image needs ALT
- Is the release date 2 July or 5 June?? Please create a "Release history" section where you add the correct release date with a source
- Genre should be only "Pop", as others are not sourced in the article's body
Background
edit- her first English-language album → no "-" here
- having co-written almost sixty songs → numbers above ten should not be written out
- first a Spanish-language album → a Spanish language album first
- has always been by idol → I think you want to say "my idol" here?
Composition and recording
edit- is best for the two of them → is best for both
Critical reception
edit- was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" in → was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" recording in
- "It's not hard to imagine → "it's not hard to imagine
Chart performance
edit- This section should be "Commercial performance"
- No flaws here ;)
Music video
edit- The accompanying music video → An accompanying music video (don't start abruptly)
- with Shakira in many of her music videos → with Shakira for various other projects
- whilst it was edited by → and edited by
- falls off the track and into water beneath → no "and" here
- Throughout the video → replace "video" with "clip" to avoid repeating yourself
- seemingly as a metaphor for finding the strength to fly on her own → Remove this. I don't see any critic saying this, and thus it is your own opinion.
- does not go through with it and walks away → fails and walks away
Live performances
edit- I will take another look on this section after you fix the heavy repetation of "performed"; use another expressions like "sang, made an appearance..."
Track listing and formats
edit- No need for "formats" in the title
- Is there a digital download out there? If no, then remove it from the infobox
Credits and personnel
edit- from the album's booklet: → from the liner notes of Fijación Oral, Vol. 1
Charts
edit- Flawless ;)
Release history
edit- Don't forget to create one!
Notes
edit- For both notes, please remove "In English translation" with "Translation in English"
References
edit- Avoid shouting in refs 13, 19, 22, 36 and 40
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 32.9% is still ok!
Media
edit- Image seems stable
References
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
- No dead links! Good job!
Outcome
edit- Little issues here and there, but overall, the article is in a good shape. On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:22, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
- Done @Cartoon network freak: Alex talk 23:23, 28 December 2017 (UTC)
- Passing this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:07, 29 December 2017 (UTC)
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