Talk:No Meals on Wheels/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 20:23, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• Lead

wheelchair friends, that Peter decides -> This line is missing something like "with this", "so", "after this", or something that connect both sentences.*

The episode was written by Mike Henry an directed by Greg Colton -> typo

• Cultural references

Super Friends.[5][4] -> Super Friends.[4][5]

• Reception

Maybe the line -> it was the 35th most-watched episodie of the week could be added.

• References

All need the work, where is possible.

• Categories

Family Guy (season 5) episodes | 2007 television episodes -> 2007 television episodes | Family Guy (season 5) episodes

Practically only there is an issue (*), is well written, so I put this on hold one week. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 20:23, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

everything execpt the refrences are fixed can you speify about refrences. --Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 20:56, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

E.g. Yahoo TV made the work on ref. 1, the publisher is fine. in ref 4 TV Squad made the work, and Weblogs, Inc. is the publisher. In ref 3, MovieWeb made the work and MovieWeb, Inc is the publisher. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 21:08, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

Done. Gage (talk) 06:24, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

Ref 7 need publisher. And that all. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 06:57, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

I belif its done. --Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 07:34, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

Done. Gage (talk) 13:24, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

Ok, for me it's all fine. So I pass its nomination. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 17:28, 3 August 2010 (UTC)