Talk:No Mercy (2003)/GA1

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Article is looking good. Some suggestions:

• The main event saw WWE Champion Brock Lesnar defeated The Undertaker - just "defeat"
• Specify currency (link United States dollar) in "$6.2 million"
• All wrestlers were from the SmackDown brand - a storyline division - should be an endash or unspaced emdash, per WP:DASH
• Should Eddie Guerrero be referred to by his surname rather than just a casual "Eddie"?
• Seems to be inconsistency between "The Undertaker" and "the Undertaker" - if "the" is part of his title, it should be capitalised (also happens with "The Big Show"/"the Big Show"/just "Big Show")
• she would be forced to resign as authority figure of SmackDown - if "SmackDown" refers to the show, it should be italicised, or if the company, it should have an exclamation point
• the pay-per-view event began with a standard match - "PPV" has been established
• Doug and Danny Basham[Daniel Hollie] - missing a space before bracket
• It'd be great if you switched around the Guerrero/Undertaker images, as both are facing away from the text (read more at WP:MOS#Images)
• ...which Cena calls an FU - maybe put "FU" in quotes so unfamiliar readers don't mistake this for some kind of anagram (perhaps then put other move-names in quotes)
• ...causing Cena to submit - it doesn't make sense grammatically for me to "cause you" to do something. Maybe "leading Cena" instead.
• bashing the Big Show's head into an exposed steel turnbuckle - bashing = not the most encyclopedic word
• Stephanie McMahon was forced to resign as SmackDown General Manager. On the SmackDown following No Mercy - first "SmackDown" should have an exclamation point (if it is the company) and second should be italicised for the show title
• On the November 6 edition of Smackdown - as above
• It remained on the chart until the week of December 20, ranking tweleft - "tweleft"? That's a new word!

Nice work. If you can get these fixed, I'll promote this to a GA. Good luck - the article's on hold for a week. —97198 (talk) 12:31, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

All the above issues have been addressed. If there's anything else, let me know. Cheers, DoomsDay 20:41, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

Nice work, and thanks for getting to these so quickly. I'll promote the article :) —97198 (talk) 01:38, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks very much for your review and comments, and for passing the article. Cheers, DoomsDay 01:46, 3 December 2008 (UTC)