Talk:No Mistakes/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by DarklyShadows in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: DarklyShadows (talk · contribs) 23:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
I'm excited and honored to review your article. Just give me a bit to review it. DarklyShadows (talk) 23:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
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Infoxbox and lead
edit- Looks good
Background
edit- "and he contributed" → "and contributed"
- "had previously featured" → "was previously featured"
- Done for the above --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Compostion and lyrics
edit- Looks good
Release and promotion
edit- This could maybe be added to 'Background' because of how short it is.
- Not done I understand it is short but four sentences can be its own section as long as that's not loads of separate sections, plus it deals with the subjects of both release and promotion --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Critical reception
edit- Looks good
Commercial performance and appearances in media
edit- "the song entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 36" → ""No Mistakes" debuted at number 36 on the US Billboard Hot 100"
- Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- "The song also debuted on the US Streaming Songs chart at number 17" → "The song also entered the US Streaming Songs, peaking at number 17"
- Done with changes --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
edit- Looks good
Charts
edit- Looks good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks good at 17.4%
- MOS:CAPS issue on Ref 9
- Not done as that is how Jay-Z is stylized at times --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
External links
edit- Looks good
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold for now. This article looks good and is really well written! The comments shouldn't take long at all to address! DarklyShadows (talk) 02:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- DarklyShadows Have responded and thanks for the review, able to pass now? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake You did everything I asked and looks even better! So I’m going to ✓ Pass this nomination! DarklyShadows (talk) 09:05, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- DarklyShadows That's awesome, pleasure working with you on this! --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:16, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake It was my pleasure! You are not only a great reviewer, but also a great editor! I look forward to see what you do in the future! DarklyShadows (talk) 09:22, 7 July 2020 (UTC)