Talk:North Carolina Highway 124

GA Review

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Reviewer: 420Traveler (talk · contribs) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Review coming soon. -420Traveler (talk) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Upgraded to C Class! -420Traveler (talk) 17:00, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Lede

• I would add last sentence in first paragraph up further. Example: "Entirely within Edgecombe County, it travels east from NC 42 near Bridgersville......"
• Describe US 258 as "U.S. Route 258 (US 258)"
• I'd say northeast of Bridgersville because that's how it looks on a topo map, but I may be wrong.
• "until 1963 or 1964" would "until sometime between 1963 and 1964" sound better?
• In infobox, I would put circa 1933 since it was between 1931 and 1933.

Route description

• Once again with Bridgersville.
• Also, will need a topo map reference for Bridgersville since Google doesn't show it.
• "NC 124 begins by" Remove the word "begins".
• "It intersects" change the "it"s to something else.
• "At the intersection, NC 124 turns to the northeast. It continues for 3 miles (4.8 km) through a rural area to its eastern terminus at NC 42 and NC 43 near Cobbs Crossroads." I would remove "At the intersection" and combine two sentences.
• "3 miles" change to "three miles"
• Put references in order.
• Add link to Annual average daily traffic.
• For Google reference, make the map pop up as satellite map.

History

• Put references in order.
• "6 miles" change to "six miles" for all under 10.
• Add current state map as a reference after last sentence.

• @Ncchild: Here is round 1, let me know if you have questions. -420Traveler (talk) 13:13, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

  @420Traveler I think I have completed everything. Let me know if you see anything else! Ncchild (talk) 19:32, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

  @Ncchild: Looks good, just a couple things: "near Old Sparta" add what direction it is from it. And add that in the lede too;

"Travelled six miles" add in approximately or roughly. Then I'll pass it. -420Traveler (talk) 15:53, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

@420Traveler: Both should be done! Thank you once again for reviewing! Ncchild (talk) 02:16, 9 June 2022 (UTC)