Talk:North Transfer Station

Latest comment: 4 years ago by SounderBruce in topic GA Review
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk06:26, 29 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

Moved to mainspace by SounderBruce (talk). Self-nominated at 18:50, 11 February 2020 (UTC).Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)Reply


Why not. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • I know it's complete, but is it operating?
    • Fixed.
  • I haven't gone through the article yet but I can see the lead is a bit lacking. Maybe you need to add some history to it.
  • Could add some more building features too.
    • Expanded lead.
  • "Community amenities, including the plaza and public artwork, were installed in March 2016 while work continued inside the buildings to install electrical and HVAC systems" Comma after 2016?
  • Or split the sentences to include the progress for each building instead.
  • Rewrote and split the sentence.
  • AGF on offline sources.

What a dump. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:06, 10 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Nova Crystallis: All done. Thanks for the review. SounderBruce 22:18, 10 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
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I made an adjustment to the dashes used between numbers per the policy at MOS:ENTO. Hyphens are used for compound words, etc. But dashes are always used for figures or to represent the word "through."--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 22:56, 7 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Esprit15d: The page number is literally "3-19". It's how government documents are typically formatted, so please use the script with more care. SounderBruce 22:59, 7 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
I'm not willing to fight about it, so I won't push it further, but I literally cited the Wikipedia policy, which you have seemed to ignore. Also, that's not how hyphens are used even outside of Wikipedia. The endash is used for value ranges.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 23:05, 7 March 2020 (UTC)Reply