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How can I improve this article? I believe this company is doing a lot of work toward improving the quality of life humans and animals alike. How can list the company in other categories as it is suggested? (Gibbons61 (talk) 23:53, 2 October 2013 (UTC))
The first issue I notice is that this seems like an article written by someone with a conflict of interest. It seems to me, someone w/o vast knowledge of pharma companies,like an employee wrote it. This probably isn't the case as I assume good faith. I think that in text citations would help tremendously.For instance when it describes the reason behind the companies founding you should link to a reference that shows that this is fact not opinion. Although I work in Emergency Medicine my knowledge of biotech is limited. This company seems important and worthy off an article to me. It's def worth working to improve this article. These are just my two cents.Let me know if you have any more questions I'm always happy to help.Jcmiller1215 (talk) 00:06, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
Looking better. I would focus less on Ron Najafi as a individual and more on the company it's self. So far it seems like a bio of the founder and it will get critiqued over his notability. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(people) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jcmiller1215 (talk • contribs) 00:37, 3 October 2013 (UTC)