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editThis article comes straight out of Sunday school--its tone is inappropriate, its content historically doubtful (that Ferreira reconverted is probably completely imaginary). Rewrite, anyone?Drmies (talk) 04:57, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
This article comes straight out of Sunday school--its tone is inappropriate, its content historically doubtful (that Ferreira reconverted is probably completely imaginary). Rewrite, anyone?Drmies (talk) 04:57, 1 December 2008 (UTC)Reply