Talk:O Tú o Ninguna/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:01, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
Initial Comments:
edit- I think the "Alt" description could be a bit more detailed
- Shouldn't the translation be "Or You or Nobody" and not "Or You Or Nobody"?
- "and peaked number seven" --> "and peaked at number seven"
- Suggestion: "amidst the large crowd in the city." --> "amidst a large crowd in the city."
- The second and third paragraphs in the article are the exact same
- "In the lyrics, the protagonist cannot imagine being with anyone else besides his love interest." --> Uh... do the liner notes actually say that?
- Suggestion: I would flip-flop the two lists you provided in the "See also" section so they are alphabetized
- In Reference #12, you should provide a link to the Orange County Register article, much like you did in the body paragraphs of the article
- ON HOLD – ping me with questions. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 21:01, 22 May 2017 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Holy shit! How did I not notice where I accidentally pasted the second paragraph from the album's background? That's so embarrassing. Anyhow, I've done everything else. Regarding the lyrics, the album booklet contains the lyrics and it's my attempt to best summarize the song without veering into original research territory. It sucks that none of the reviews that I did on the album actually talks about the song. If there's any other suggestions and I will do what I can. As a side note, huge props to Jaespinoza for creating the article and making it a DYK back in 2011. Erick (talk) 18:30, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
- It happens lol. All has been taken care of. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 01:01, 24 May 2017 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Holy shit! How did I not notice where I accidentally pasted the second paragraph from the album's background? That's so embarrassing. Anyhow, I've done everything else. Regarding the lyrics, the album booklet contains the lyrics and it's my attempt to best summarize the song without veering into original research territory. It sucks that none of the reviews that I did on the album actually talks about the song. If there's any other suggestions and I will do what I can. As a side note, huge props to Jaespinoza for creating the article and making it a DYK back in 2011. Erick (talk) 18:30, 23 May 2017 (UTC)