Talk:Objection (Tango)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 17:22, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

I'm in a particularly good mood today, so I decided to review just music articles! And, I love "Objection (Tango)" so I had to review this. Prism △ 17:22, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

A lucky day for all of us nominators! :D --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

• Disambiguation links: Not present.
• Checklinks: One status (uncategorized redirect)-class external link.

Fixed --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

• Original research: Not present.

In depth

1. Lead

• In the infobox, change "maxi cd single" to "maxi CD single"

Changed. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

• In the first paragraph, "bandoneon" is italicized where it shouldn't be, since it was adapted to English (spanish is bandoneón)

I changed it to the Spanish one. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

• Second paragraph → please space "France." from "The song"

Spaced.

2. Background

• Last paragraph: I don't think it was released on 6 July 2013... haha.

Oh god, what a silly mistake! Come to think of it, I remember changing it and it's even mentioned in the revision history. I've noticed sometimes WP doesn't update small changes. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

• Remove italicizing from "bandoneon", like in the lead.

I changed this one to the Spanish one too. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

4. Critical reception

• "weddingreception" → "wedding reception"

Changed. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

5. Commercial performance

• Like I pointed out in the GA review for "Spinning Around", my English is not perfect, but I think you should change "Although not" to "Although it was not". Correct me if I'm wrong.

Right again :) --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

6. Music video

• I'm not sure if you can use ATRL as a reliable source. I never saw it being used in any other article.

I checked before using it. There is one FA artice that cites it and one GA article that cites it. So I went ahead and used it --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

7. Live performances and usage in media

• "Objection (Tango" → "Objection (Tango)"

Changed. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

8. & 9. Charts and certifications

• Merge certifications into charts section like in the GA for "Spinning Around".

Merged. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

Final comments

You really do write very well and it was an interesting read. I actually learned a bit more of a very important song of my childhood. Just correct the errors and I'll pass it. Maybe this can get to FA eventually. Prism △ 17:22, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for your great reviews and comments! I really appreciate it. If you have any article at GAN I would love to review it for you. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:42, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for passing it! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 18:15, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.